Our jointly written renga (story) in Open Democracy.

Photograph: Apple peel closure and non-closure -- copyright Kyi May Kaung

http://www.opendemocracy.net/arts/renga_readers_4405.jsp

I liked the ending the best. Opening paragraph was given to us. I think story wandered badly, but ending was brilliant and funny.

Question is, if this were a novel, would anyone buy it -- read it to the end?